WOW! So very twisted.... :) The flow and rhyme of this piece are excellent. The first stanza, i thought the words were put just so that it sounded a little forced, but the rest of the piece was very well done.
*ME*

Its insanely vivid with great detail and emotion. I love how with a simple rhyme scheme its amazing well kept together. It flows so well.

Oh, so nice :D

Omg great poem! the flow and rhyme is amazing! u did a great job on it! 5/5
keep up the great work hun!
x o x o

Wow thats amazing....i really liked it...u got some talent keep it up....by the way thanks for da comment on my poems.....5/5

I love it. The details, your choice of words...everything.
=)

A very nicely written piece. The second I read the first stanza I knew I just HAD to read the rest! The beginning was amazing. Your choice of words were nice and you flow in the beginning and end were really good. A little rocky in the middle, but still an outstanding poem! You're an amazing poet and your work is too amazing for words! :]

"I can't describe this feeling,
It's a never-ending ache
My innocence is peeling,
For made clear is my mistake"

^My favorite lines! :]
definitely 5/5!

Great work on this, the emotion was clear and heartfelt. You powerfully described this hard bittersweet situation.
I loved the ending, too, specially the last line :).
Keep writing!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Loved this write...you really made clear the emotion you were trying to get across in the poem

Awesome poem =]
so much emotion is felt
and so much angry lovee
no girl should be in a relationship where she is hit.. if he hits u once.. u might love him but jus leavee!
5/5 amazing job

Nice. great poem. flows really well =).

Wow. this is really good.

Nice poem....i really like it

Very emotional sad but sometimes its true. Keep up the great work

Very good poem, Had me intrigued and couldn't stop reading

OMG!!!!! I'm so glad you commented my poem so that I could find this one that you've written. It's really awesome!!! The feeling and the flow just pieced it together so nicely. Great choice of words. You have a lot of talent. PLEASE keep writing and dont ever let anyone put your poetry down. You have a gift and you should always write for yoursefl, not for other people. 5/5
your friend
kat

Hey i really liked this alot you know how to writ so well i hope you keep this up you really should because you know what you are saying

This was an amazing peice. Such simple wording makes it absolutely wonderful.

Wow...
An excellent poem!
I love it!

Excellent use of imagery and great passion in this 1.
loved it =D
5/5