Love gone unnoticed

by samie renae   Jan 26, 2008


She stares at him
down the hall
he doesnt notice her
she stares at him
when he drives by
he still doesnt notice

the next day
he walks up to her
and says
i havwe loved u since
i first saw u
but i didnt know
what to say

so this is where
i ask u
will u be mine
she stares at him
for a minute thinking

when she finally
speaks again she says
i have stared at u
when u go by me
and u dotn notice me
yet i have always
marveled ur eyes
and how the make
the day shine brighter

this makes the boy
smile
then she smiles
and says
ill be urs 4 forever more

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Nice poem
    i wish sumthin like that would happen to me

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful piece very beautiful, i liked the whole story and now i wonder is this story true??

  • 16 years ago

    by samie renae

    Ight but i always spell like that thanx for the comment i have a few that ryme but they arent on here yet they ar estill inmy notebooks ight

  • 16 years ago

    by IcAnMaKeIt

    Your peoms dnt rhyme but they still touch hearts gd job..but check da spelling

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