by SilentRebuke
Really great one Charisma! I like the pace to this poem, and the fact that it isn't too cluttered with words, shorter verses, but still just as powerful. I really liked the 7th stanza: |
I absolutely loved the flow of this poem. The last stanza finished it all with a good bang! Nice job. |
It was a good piece. My favorite stanzas were by far numbers six and seven. The emotions, rhymes and flow was great. |
by debbylyn
Somehow listening to a sad song can just bring on the tears....reminds me of that Joe Diffie song... |
by C Cattaway
It sounded like a well versed song.. maybe Joni Mitchell would have sang those lines, once.. You have taken a common subject, and given it a personal slant.. Well done. Fantastically written. xx |
by Becca
5/5! that was great. I understand what it's like to be tired of holding everything in and just wanting release. Great Piece! |
by TillyMariex
Wow...this is like...amazing...i really like it <3 |
by Gem
"Turned a sad song on |
by Ike Dizzle
Aww I know the feeling of a broken heart and it sucks cuz u seem like you are all alone and no one feels ur pain. Its hard to get over bt you will. I'm in the middle of that now. Great poem though 5/5 |