Nice poem i guess you base your poems about life..same with me great job imma rate it a 5/5 =] lol keep it up hope to read more

Nice poem i feel the same way i still ask myself why? all the time keep up the good work

Nice piece! I love this:

I have no idea why it is I cry
And every night I ask the question why

Wow I love it I can feel it. It crazy because for 2 straight years when I was in my room alone I would cry and I never knew why. I would ask myself is it becuz I was in a relationship that goin down but no they were different tears I was hurting inside I knew that the only thing I didn't know was why. So I love your poem I understand it and it was beautifully written. 5/5

This poem is excellent, it plays on peoples emotions by letting them know how you feel =]
I cant say i fully understand what you mean coz i have the opposite problem

Great job this poem has a good flow
5/5

Again you rhymed in some place but not in others which just kills the flow. You should be consistent .. either ryhme all over or not at all. I liked how you opened it because it kept my interesting but I lost interest as the poem progressed ... experiment with some new words and liven your poetry. All in all good job *4/5*