My darkest night

by Ingrid   Jan 26, 2008


When you left my day turned into the darkest night
Without you nothing ever again will feel right
At night I have trouble sleeping, twisting and turning
lost in a grief that is so profound and deep burning
a hole right through the heart you once treasured
Now left alone in infinite agony that cannot be measured
How can I pick up the pieces and go on living,
with a heart so badly broken and tired of aching?
I know that in time I will find the strength to carry on
I am just waiting to hit rock bottom and let it sink in...you are really gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    Achingly sad but hopefully cathartic. Cold comfort to know that when we reach rock bottom the only way is up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Great poem short and i love the flow
    of the poem its on point, well written how couldn't i give you a 5/5 awesome write!!...=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    The sadness crys from your words in this piece. Excellent job!
    ~Hugs~
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    This is one of the best poems that you have Ingrid;
    good rhyming, deep, true, full of emotions and sad.

    as much as this poem is beautiful is as much as its sad

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Ingrid,

    this poem, you don't usually write sad poems but this one had so much sadness filled into every word that i just felt it myself. you are never alone. you have friends there for you.

    remember what you said to me?? keep your head up high.

    5/5 hugs, David

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