Great rhythm! I can vividly picture an animated vocal production of this poem, heh. Reads a bit like a haiku (disregarding the 5,7,5 meter), with the sing-song feel, mid-sentence breaks, and overall feel. I like the topic, but mostly the various emphases (correct plural? Ha!), and rapid, pretty original imagery. Great stuff.

I love how you write :)

"Sometime I'll be
getting high, off
God, books, love or weed I
seek to delve"

Excellent intro, by the way...Heh. I especially like that with the playful rhyme of 'high' and 'I,' instead of choosing 'dive' (a near rhyme), you chose 'delve.' Really like that.

Yep.

Wow...
Deep and filled with emotions from the beginning to the end, so brilliant and powerful. I love your writing style- your pieces always touch me and leave me in awe and this one is not an exception.
I like the ending a lot and the capitalization of the word "life" is very effective.