They Have No Reflection

by PygmyPuff   Jan 27, 2008


Lightening punches through thunder
hiding whispered breaths
spoken light as a feather.

Children tremble in the corners
waiting to be called
to be the next one used.

Desire and nightmares blend
together into one;
a hellish incubus.

The only thing left behind
is the spiced scent of
the exploitation of a child.

It's like listening to the sea
but only through a seashell,
as raindrop slides down my window.

Two thousand eyes of righteousness
will close tonight
as the sun meets the horizon.

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  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Well written, I loved your choice of words, 5.5 for sure :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Again, great style. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW! Wow, this is, you literally left me speechless , bravo, this poem posses pure brilliance!
    It is really beautiful and so sad in same time, well done, I really can't describe how much you impressed me.
    The ending stanza is my favorite one, the ending is so effective and simply fascinating.
    Whole piece is very deep and tone that you created in every line is touching.
    You should be proud on your self.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This is absolutely mind- blowing and I really can't express how much I like it. Whole poem is excellently written, with amazing descriptions that created truly vivid imagery. I am deeply touched with this piece. You picked great, meaningful topic and wrote priceless sad piece.
    Keep writing, you really have a way with words.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.

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