Comments : Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    I imagine everything and this poem makes you see a lot of stuff not a lot of poets can do that in their poem but you did and thats why this is a great poem . thanx for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    I like the way you wrote it...u can picture everything. and its really true...everything that is born must die..its just the way life is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Close your eyes and imagine a garden in the winter time
    Do you see how it is icy, cold, and dead?
    Now slowly let the flowers grow and the trees start to bloom
    Do you see how everything is alive, green and anew?
    But yet again there comes a time were every thing must die.
    So the flowers start to wilt, and the leaves start to fall from the trees, and now we are back to the winter garden again.

    this was great stanza and great poetry! I will love to continue to read all your poems as life goes on, The friendship we share will never end. You are my friend and I care about you. I am glad you and I and Justin started talking to each other. You guys are great friends.

    this poem I rated 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by loulou

    This is an amazing poem!I liked it so much and you wrote something really special about life...so it's a very good work!