by Bella Jan 27, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
How many times have I looked in the mirror to see a fake smile, |
by Deana
I liked the lines a lot with the exception of the repeat of "how many times" I think if you just used your verses' and repeated how many times only a couple of times it would read better.(just my thoughts but I'm for sure no expert)all in all a very good write. |
by briana
Nice poem people can relate to it i know i do |