Wow...
I am speechless, truly impressed.

Amazing write, I can't express how much I like it. The imagery that you portrayed is so beautiful, creative and vivid. Whole poem is excellently written, different from anything I've read before. Remarkable, detailed piece, with every line flawlessly highlighted with superb descriptions. Your wording is excellent, too, and the whole atmosphere of this piece is simply overwhelming.
This is true poetic gemstone, a poem filled with such astounding uniqueness.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading your fantastic work~