The price of flying, ot just not giving up on love. You are giving here a very interesting concept, you can be free and "fly" but for that you can't have somebody with you as you can only fly alone. If you want to love, you are depending on the one you love and can't be free. This idea is something that many can relate to. I liked the idea... The whole structure was good, the flow was fasinating, the choosing of words was interesting and the rhyming weren't forced, what gave the raw emotions to flow. All was great, keep it up 5/5