This is beautiful and amazing!!!!!! it truly is wonderful!!!

Well you expressed your point on a strong way, but honestly I think that this poem lack originality.
This is just my personal opinion and I don't want to offend you but I think that you could write this better. If you use some unique metaphor you will described your emotions on more powerful and more interesting way.
Overall I am not a fan of typical love poetry but I don't like this poem too much. I like the ending line it is very compact with the rest of the piece but all in all I think that this could be better.

When I correct things I'm a psycho. Just to warn you. :)

It's let's hold hands for the first line.

Second stanza third line theres is there's

Okay now that I've gotten that out of the way. :) It was well written and the rhythm seemed consistent. Very good job. Five.