Short and sweet~ (bitter sweet? Ahaha~) That's how I like them!
Awesome write!!

I enjoyed the short lines you used here. It was effective in getting your message across and I could really relate. Well done *5/5*

"I need to end this,
But how?
Loving you so long,
It hurts now."

I was deeply moved by these lines the most because I've felt this way before, as lot of people probably have and the way you put it was passionate, beautiful and creative. 5/5

Good poem! You seem like a very strong, determined girl, who just keeps being thrown at with challenges that life brings. Keep strong girl!! :) i have faith in you && if you ever need to talk, just holla at me! :)

I love reading your poems!! :) Keep it up & take care!!

Thats right you dont need all he doing is holdin you back and hurting you
keep writing!!!...=)

This poem is just ok.. it's short but has meaning.. it would be better if you'd expressed yourself more in your words .. this would've been a great poem...
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