Comments : Cinderella rides the bus (ballad)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    I loved reading this. I especially liked the way you used
    It was somewhere in a fairytale
    The story of two lovers did start
    In high school years and summer days
    Until the world tore them apart.
    and then again with a subtle change.
    Great
    Michael 5/5