by crystaljean88 Jan 27, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Having one child is hard enough, |
by Lori Lee
This poem is good..very realistic 5/5 |
Another well written poem with a powerful message short and to the piont |
by she
Good flow,best of luck:],stay strong |
by jLegendc
Ohh i like this one.. talks about pregnancy in an early age.. it's really good that you wrote the truth of what's going to happen when girls get pregnant and how a big change will it be in their lives.. i like this =] |
It was a cute............poem, but it could have been a little better i thought, but it was still sweet, but id have to say i think it deserves a 4/5, but the message and what your trying to say, like whats happeneing in ur life, maybe? it was good |