Always expect the unexpected, don't you agree? |
by Hawaiizang3l
Stay strong, if you can get through one im pretty sure you can get through with another one! :) |
by Not
I love this poem I love stories poems , and this one is wonderful |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Stary strong,dear.Everything will be okay.I'm sure you'll be an even greater person and mother with another baby on the way.Like I said on the discussion board.I'd kill to be able to have a baby.But remember everything happens for a reason and if you ever want to talk I'm here to listen and try to help. |
It was a cute............poem, but it could have been a little better i thought, but it was still sweet, but id have to say i think it deserves a 4/5, but the message and what your trying to say, like whats happeneing in ur life, maybe? it was good |
by jLegendc
Ohh i like this one.. talks about pregnancy in an early age.. it's really good that you wrote the truth of what's going to happen when girls get pregnant and how a big change will it be in their lives.. i like this =] |
by she
Good flow,best of luck:],stay strong |
Another well written poem with a powerful message short and to the piont |
by Lori Lee
This poem is good..very realistic 5/5 |