Broken Heart

by XxXLoveSucksXxX   Jan 27, 2008


This blade I use to taint my skin
I'm fighting a battle I cannot win
The darkness howling at my door
Damn this pain I can't take it anymore
There's a fire growing deep inside
Though the tears all I can ask is why?
I hate you for what you have done
I can't believe I thought you were the one
You were suppose to save me
I guess that was a dream that wasn't meant to be
I keep the rage I felt inside
Stop beating on the door I'm trying to die
As my blood runs down the drain and the lights start to fade
You break down the door and look at the mess i have made
You scream and you cry
You beg me not to die
But as the blood drips out of me
My life finally ceases to be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poetically Broken

    Great poem....loved it......
    and dont worry you're not alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    This was really great i liked your word choice. It flowed so very well love it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is written very well
    Great job, it was sad yet an enjoyable read
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    ....woah. I rlly liked this. no i LOVED it. I can really relate to the hatred and depression this poem gives off. it was very well written. you're a talented poet no doubt. keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more from you. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    I love your poems they are wonderful!!!
    Plz keep writing cant wiat to read more ..