Untitled(wrote it for my bestie)

by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT   Jan 27, 2008


There are deepest heartstrings could last

The feelings wouldn't decrase like the past

Made so many things, the loving are blast

many people thought about her wrong things so fast

That girl is going to give it all she have

Everybody got a wall, she's going to save hers

The love couldn't explain any deeper

She know what is real and she's a keeper

Sometime wall breaks, it fall apart and it hurts

It take days to rebulid the wall for protection

If somebody choose her love, then heart will melt.

As she wondered a lot, it's how she felt.

She dealt through many things

Going to keep getting what she want

Love are real to her, the bullshitting are nonsense.

Tell me whatcha you think? She said she is deeply related to this. *touch my heart* so what yall think of this?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice i absolutly LOVED it it was GREAT! nice write and flow! 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    I loves it!!!!!!!!!!

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