by Melpomene Jan 28, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
A set of feet shuffled quietly across an empty corridor, while men dressed in orange jumpsuits stared silently through iron bars. A man, weighed down by heavy chains, walked at a slow pace, with his head held high, Read to face his punishment. |
by Lu
Wow a very mind blowing write you have weaved here. And the ending ... one I wasn't quite prepared for but I knew something was about to unravel when he said " he did it for love" |
by Nix
I am sure that I left you a long comment yesterday on this piece, but maybe I accidentally deleted it or forgot to hit the comment button below. |
:( that's really cool but really sad dangit i was all in a happy mood too.... grrrr im with them lol wonderful write :) I wish i could write stories but im aweful at it. |
A bit long, but very well written, ive read alot of your works, and i like them, keep this!! |
by Tammie
From the beginning you had me swimming through your words. Wondering what you meant in the beginning when the man said he did it for love. I was captured the whole way through by your amazing imagery and details. You captured my heart at the end, a truely touching story which you wrote painfully beauitfully. |