Twenty Five On Death Row [Short Story]

by Melpomene   Jan 28, 2008


A set of feet shuffled quietly across an empty corridor, while men dressed in orange jumpsuits stared silently through iron bars. A man, weighed down by heavy chains, walked at a slow pace, with his head held high, Read to face his punishment.

Two guards on either side of this prisoner gripped him tightly as they walked towards the end of a dim lit corridor. Metal bats gripped also within their free hands, Prepared incase of any trouble which seemed to always break out when a man walked this very path. This man looked nervous and so he should be, for what was about to happen will never be forgotten.

This man of only twenty five had committed an unforgivable crime, taking the life of his innocent and caring wife. He had pleaded not guilty to all charges as he said he did it out of pure love. He had been sentenced to death, and today was his final day.

Each step this man took through the cold, dark and lonely corridor was another second of this precious life wasted, wasted into nothing more then the past. The handcuffs bolted tightly around his frail wrists, made it impossible for him to move his arms, Yet the bolted chains around his legs made it even harder to take his final steps of life.

As this man finally reaches his destination at the end of the corridor, his tense brown eyes darken, just like a rain cloud on a stormy winters night. His broad shoulders stiffen as he comes face to face with a nightmare that has been replaying in the back of his mind for weeks. The realization of what is going to happen finally sinks in as the door to his destination is opened, a door known as a portal to hell.

His olive skin become pale, as his eyes travel to what will bring him to this grave,
He gulps silently as many faces watch him with evil smirks of destruction. He thinks to himself, so this is what they call hell. His thoughts travel to his wifes face. He can imagine her long golden hair shining in the sun, and her ocean blue eyes glistening.

Suddenly his thoughts are shattered away as he is pulled forward by the thick metal chain, which is keeping him so dreadfully bound. This man is treated as a convict, Worthless. His hearts pace starts to quicken as he is told to take a step up onto the thick wooden box. His eyes tightly squeezed shut, as cold hands grasp his neck. This unknown person places something around his tender throat.

The man finally realizes what was placed over his head; he feels the rope digging into the muscles of his neck. He tries to block out what is happening to him, while the Warden asks him for his final words. With a gasp of air he screams, "Remember this, I died for love!" as the wooden box which is placed so carefully underneath him is kicked away. This man is left to hand for his unforgivable crime. He was just twenty five, on death row.

All these people who watched his soul escape his body as he died; saw him as a murderer, a cold blooded killer with no remorse. Little did these people know that this man's wife was in nothing but utter pain, her golden locks no longer shined and her ocean blue eyes had turned to mist. She had cancer, which had spread throughout her entire body, leaving her to suffer and eventually die.

She had begged her husband to set her free, Take her life and let her die at ease without this agonizing pain she had been going through. She said she had nothing left to gain and it had been her last wish in life. So was this an act of a cold blooded killer, or an act of love?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Wow a very mind blowing write you have weaved here. And the ending ... one I wasn't quite prepared for but I knew something was about to unravel when he said " he did it for love"

    You captivated my interest from beginning to end and I found the entire content to be very strong and the ending hit me like a tonne of bricks .... very deep impact on the reader's mind.

    The visuals you created were strong and engrave deep images after the read. I can near visualize the quick pulsing beat in his neck, sweat dripping down his forehead, palms clammy ..... this piece creates many visuals.

    So was this an act of a cold blooded killer, or an act of love?

    You've added a tough question at the end. "Cold blooded killer" I don't think so. Many would see it as murder. That only God has the right to take a life. And many would see it as the ultimate sacrifice of love ... to give up your own life, to end the pain of one you love ... more than life itself.
    Which way would I say .... Hmmmm not really sure until the day I would be placed in that circumstance. As with many things we would say .... I would never do that .... but when faced with the same circumstances, would we ?

    I really liked how you added that ending ... really makes you think.

    Great read
    Thought provoking, great imagery and amazing storyline.

    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I am sure that I left you a long comment yesterday on this piece, but maybe I accidentally deleted it or forgot to hit the comment button below.
    Anyway this is frustrating but I just want to let you know that this is absolutely amazing piece I will leave you a more detail comment soon.

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    :( that's really cool but really sad dangit i was all in a happy mood too.... grrrr im with them lol wonderful write :) I wish i could write stories but im aweful at it.

  • 16 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    A bit long, but very well written, ive read alot of your works, and i like them, keep this!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    From the beginning you had me swimming through your words. Wondering what you meant in the beginning when the man said he did it for love. I was captured the whole way through by your amazing imagery and details. You captured my heart at the end, a truely touching story which you wrote painfully beauitfully.

    One thing in the first line of the third paragraph, you wrote 'twenty give' instead of 'twenty five'. Just thought I'd let you know. :]

    Amazing piece, you are very talented not only in writing aweing poetry, but stories as well. :] 5/5 Definately.

    Tammie xx

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