OH MY GOODNESS, this was purley amazing, i think everyone should read it, its a very good life lesson, and its so utterly sad, she was in pain, and he only asked of what she wanted, he wanted to make her happy, awwwwwwwwwww, i short story overall was amazing, it flowed nicely, and it was very descriptive, and i just wanted to keep reading more and more of it. Dont ever quite writing, or i'll have to hunt you down ,and beat you, lol, j/k, your a very good writer, and well deserved 5/5

From the beginning you had me swimming through your words. Wondering what you meant in the beginning when the man said he did it for love. I was captured the whole way through by your amazing imagery and details. You captured my heart at the end, a truely touching story which you wrote painfully beauitfully.

One thing in the first line of the third paragraph, you wrote 'twenty give' instead of 'twenty five'. Just thought I'd let you know. :]

Amazing piece, you are very talented not only in writing aweing poetry, but stories as well. :] 5/5 Definately.

Tammie xx

A bit long, but very well written, ive read alot of your works, and i like them, keep this!!

:( that's really cool but really sad dangit i was all in a happy mood too.... grrrr im with them lol wonderful write :) I wish i could write stories but im aweful at it.

I am sure that I left you a long comment yesterday on this piece, but maybe I accidentally deleted it or forgot to hit the comment button below.
Anyway this is frustrating but I just want to let you know that this is absolutely amazing piece I will leave you a more detail comment soon.

Wow a very mind blowing write you have weaved here. And the ending ... one I wasn't quite prepared for but I knew something was about to unravel when he said " he did it for love"

You captivated my interest from beginning to end and I found the entire content to be very strong and the ending hit me like a tonne of bricks .... very deep impact on the reader's mind.

The visuals you created were strong and engrave deep images after the read. I can near visualize the quick pulsing beat in his neck, sweat dripping down his forehead, palms clammy ..... this piece creates many visuals.

So was this an act of a cold blooded killer, or an act of love?

You've added a tough question at the end. "Cold blooded killer" I don't think so. Many would see it as murder. That only God has the right to take a life. And many would see it as the ultimate sacrifice of love ... to give up your own life, to end the pain of one you love ... more than life itself.
Which way would I say .... Hmmmm not really sure until the day I would be placed in that circumstance. As with many things we would say .... I would never do that .... but when faced with the same circumstances, would we ?

I really liked how you added that ending ... really makes you think.

Great read
Thought provoking, great imagery and amazing storyline.

Luanne