A very lovely piece! deep and emotional, i could almsot feel the emotions in it as i read. you chose your words wisely, and this poem i found quite detailed.

Rainbow comes after the rain.
Like the raindrops, my heart is in tears.

i liked those lines. they were a great opener.
i loved how you compared raindrops to your tears in your heart. very creative indeed. i loved this one. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Thank u!=)