Comments : Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Its good to cry and yes crying makes you stronger, cry more to make you stronger but also cry to straighten out your emotions makes you happier. cry like you never cried before so you get more stronger then you ever were

  • 15 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I like where you were going with this, but it really is just too short to ram home the message it's clear you want to send out. I am a big fan of short and simple poetry, too!