by Alexandra Jade Brewer Jan 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
She looks out at a dark sky |
by Shinobi
Wow, such raw emotions like those aren't seen in every poem. Liked the words, rhyming and structure as usuall. Great job 5/5 |
Ummmm, im not sure what to say about this one, i mean it was good, powerful and emotional, but i didnt think the ending was as good and i know you could have made it, but it was still good, 4/5 |