by Alexandra Jade Brewer          Jan 28, 2008
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            lasting love
            
    
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            She looks out at a dark sky  | 
by Shinobi
| Wow, such raw emotions like those aren't seen in every poem. Liked the words, rhyming and structure as usuall. Great job 5/5 | 
| Ummmm, im not sure what to say about this one, i mean it was good, powerful and emotional, but i didnt think the ending was as good and i know you could have made it, but it was still good, 4/5 |