That was really good and its exclusive so keep up to good work

That was really good and its exclusive so keep up to good work

That was really good and its exclusive so keep up to good work

That was really good and its exclusive so keep up to good work

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. YOU SHOULD MAKE A PART TWO BUT MAKE MORE DETAIL ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT GOES ON NEXT MAYBE SOMEBODY SHOULD CATCH THEM OR SOMETHING.

Damn that's really freaky is it true? going to read part 2.

GOOD

OMG YES THERE SHOULD BE A PART 2 ME AND MY BOYFRIEND LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH !!!!!!

OMG yes there should be a part 2 this was great

Hell yeah there should be a part 2 and go into more juicier details. I read it to my boyfriend and he couldn't keep his hands off me.

Hmm, great poem. I don't think that I would ever do one of my teachera. Anyways I still liked this poem. The wording was truly great.
i saw only one thing that you could fix the "don�t". I gave this poem a 5/5.

Dat was a really good poem 5/5

You should most deff. make a part two.

Yes, make a part two. maybe include a twist.. someone heard one of your moans or screams, so the whole time, someone was listening. or you two hide and have a round 2 in an awkward place

Please please let there be a part two!!!!!!!