Very very nice... i like it a lot 5/5 i like what adam said there.. verbal born. hahaha... perfect, deffinantly needed a second part, and this is just great!
-marina

Love it
both ones of this poem!!

well dun

danielle
xx

It seems the sequel is never as good as the original but good work none the less. Keep it up. I may add u to my favorites.

Verry nice, and sounds like we went to a similar school lol. both were great keep it up

Hmm, I liked this poem it was a great addition to the first. I gave it a 5/5. The wording was great. I could see those things happening. Nive job.