Looking through millions of our pictures
Desperate to feel how it used to feel that time
Knowing now it all turns in kind of fiction
Knowing that I am not yours and you are not mine

i can totally relate

great write

I know where ur coming from on this poem and I like it alot.
Thanx for the comment.

Boy...I really feel this ....I think it's just great....thanks....xoxoxo

This is like one of those perfect break up poems that every girl needs to read when their boyfriend just broke up with them. Wow! I absolutely loved it, this is definately my favorite poem of yours I have read [thus far]

I can relate to this pom as I'm sure many others can.The flow was pretty good and I liked your wording.5/5

<3Amber

Another absolutely beautiful poem! I'm impressed... The flow was great, the word choice was decent, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

Good work keep it up