A dream

by Lizaveta   Jan 28, 2008


Snowflakes falling to the land,
Dream is not coming to the end.
Under snow the trees are bare,
Just like life without fairy-tales
Have you noticed snow is like a magic?
It makes you forget about everything tragic.
Snow might chill the boiling passions,
Light wind will take away aggression.

And as the way snowflakes fall is so slow
You can hardly see anything through snow
You end up carried away buy your imagination
Far away from familiar bus station.

Faces, magic creatures all around,
You are charmed by melodic sounds,
Is that a fairy behind the old tree?
Or just a shadow hard to see?

Hush... Catch every moment of this dream....
It's not as stupid as might seem....
These are moments your soul lives
In harmony, and you calm down with peace,

Just keep this magic carefully to the day
The snowflakes have melt and peace is taken away
And you and who is near you in all this mess
Will be carried away by fancy to that winter day
Once again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I like the connection to snow and dreams but i didn't think the flow was as good as it could potentially be.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was wonderfully written. It really takes you away from reality for a moment... I'm very impressed with this poem! Great write... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wow, I could almost feel the snow whirling around me! I love the rhyme and imagery. Perhaps this belongs in the nature section? My favourite lines were:

    "Have you noticed snow is like a magic?
    It makes you forget about everything tragic."

    Great rhetorical question. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwww! That was magical! I looove snow, even though I don't get it that often (the south sucksss) it made me feel like I was in a fantasy land! You choice of words were sooooo good! AMAZING! You are such a talented writer! Great job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was so beautiful .. I felt as if I was in your dream because you described everything so flawlessly. The images were amazing and the flow was perfect. I havent seen snow in 13 years but I can still remember the magic it brings. Well done *5/5*

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