Comments : A dream

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Well i don't know what winter is like where you live but in Russia it snows quite often:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was so beautiful .. I felt as if I was in your dream because you described everything so flawlessly. The images were amazing and the flow was perfect. I havent seen snow in 13 years but I can still remember the magic it brings. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwww! That was magical! I looove snow, even though I don't get it that often (the south sucksss) it made me feel like I was in a fantasy land! You choice of words were sooooo good! AMAZING! You are such a talented writer! Great job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wow, I could almost feel the snow whirling around me! I love the rhyme and imagery. Perhaps this belongs in the nature section? My favourite lines were:

    "Have you noticed snow is like a magic?
    It makes you forget about everything tragic."

    Great rhetorical question. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was wonderfully written. It really takes you away from reality for a moment... I'm very impressed with this poem! Great write... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I like the connection to snow and dreams but i didn't think the flow was as good as it could potentially be.