I love this poem. these are my fav lines in it:

So many days, so many weeks have passed since I stopped hoping
We'd make a perfect pair.
When someone kills your heart which you left open
The world seems violently unfair.

it flows so good and is just *perfect* :) good job!

Now I'm just sitting here holding my broken wings

I totally loved these words!perfect...and so sad

Awww...this is sad...*tear....

i liked it alot...heartfelt and touching.

good job.5/5