by Ozymandias
Thank you for the comment you left me; I thought I'd return the favor. This was good, it's a very delicate subject and I like the way you put it together. Sad ending though, is there no hope? |
by Marsha Brown
Man I thought I was going to like ya poem, but in the end, I loved it. To be in eternal pain is something that I can't stand to bare. And to have that happen over and over again without anyone there to help u, man. U strong. Keep em coming. Go and read some of my writing. Tell me wat u think |
Well you are stronger than you think for you to write that ow my god. Im lost for words, i just hope you can escape your demons one day. great poem worded in a way i can feel your pain |
Did dis really happen?,,,omg... |