Amazing. once again, lovely, sad, deep, horrific (if you really think about it), and so in love. </3

Another great write. it's sad but deep. the emotion was expressed clearly and the words were just amazing. :] i feel like i can definitely relate to this piece. It's like reading into my life, you know. this poem was amazing and intense. 5/5.

This was a good poem. I like it a lot. Although, maybe you should try putting more punctuation more and try fixing the stanzas a bit. The 2nd stanza threw it off a bit. Good job though. 4/5
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