Without You

by Edward Latina   Jan 28, 2008


Where is that familiar sense?
That familiar life?
Has Fate taken its grace?
Where am I without you?

What is this I now feel?
It's intrusion to me is unreal,
I can't understand this feeling.
What am I without you?

Can't you ever return to me?
Can you not see what I see?
Love's silk has blinded my heart,
There is nothing here without you.

The sun rises in the endless night,
No light shines in this plight,
I can't see anything anymore.
Life is nothing without you.

Stumbling through this place,
I'm left with a feeling of disgrace.
I go with nothing left.
I am nothing without you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    I loved the poem hun the flow was flawless. and the emotions in it are heart wrenching! i'm sure you will do well in the competition keep up the good work 5/5 xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    I like this poem. ]; I had to read it over and over though 'cause I just woke up. o_o
    ANYWAY.
    I really like, the last line thing. Am I making sense?
    ANYWAY. It was a good poem. Nice flow. Good words. forealzforealz.

    Good work, Amazing work, Keep it up, smile.
    -Krystal.[:

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Excellent, my fav was the third stanza
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward Latina

    Psst, I submitted this one to a Poetry Contest that can get me lotsa money if it makes it to the finals! Or even the semi-finals! So serious feedback please, I don't want to be left in the dark as to how other people think it is for the seven weeks they said it will take to inform me >.>

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