Psst, I submitted this one to a Poetry Contest that can get me lotsa money if it makes it to the finals! Or even the semi-finals! So serious feedback please, I don't want to be left in the dark as to how other people think it is for the seven weeks they said it will take to inform me >.>

Excellent, my fav was the third stanza
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I like this poem. ]; I had to read it over and over though 'cause I just woke up. o_o
ANYWAY.
I really like, the last line thing. Am I making sense?
ANYWAY. It was a good poem. Nice flow. Good words. forealzforealz.

Good work, Amazing work, Keep it up, smile.
-Krystal.[:

I loved the poem hun the flow was flawless. and the emotions in it are heart wrenching! i'm sure you will do well in the competition keep up the good work 5/5 xxx