Hey Saul not sure if this is supposed to be like this but your poem end with "I NEED MORE T and that's it no closing quotations and no IME. Thought I would check and see what is with that. I like this one alot there are many people out there who find that time is of the essence and that it seems to slip away. Even at sixteen I find that time passes in the blink of an eye and my biggest fear personally is that I will end up alone so this poem characterizes peoples lives and worries very well. Great work.

Rebbeca

This one has an error...I think. But like it anyway. You are so well at clearly expresses your feelings. Nice work, Nik