by OHgreenman Jan 28, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Lightless cloud vacillates |
An incredibly heart-breaking piece. Raw emotion oozed out of every (very well written) line. Again, your vocabulary is excellent, and thought provoking. The last line is amazing: abrupt, sincere, ... so much held in these words. |
by JEFF
Beautifully writen, great poem. =) 5/5 |
by Angie
Brings tears to the eyes.... |