Away from the sun.

by erin girl   Jan 29, 2008


It's getting so bright outside,
I feel like i should look away,
But the sun is so beautiful its hard not to stare.
Like a love i have never known,
I could stare some more,
Or the sun might blind me.
I'd rather not look..
away from the sun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a very nice and simple poem. The imagery is there, the emotion, the flow is smooth also. I loved the concept and the meaning behind it. The only problem you have now is you need to capitalize any single I; other than that everything is fine.

    Letty

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