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  • 16 years ago

    by xOrdinaryGirlx

    This is so cute mann..
    whoevaa this poemz bout, is one lucky chik!..
    keep up tha good workk

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I really like this!

    I kiss your neck so lightly.
    Sending cold chills down your spine.
    I look into your eyes.
    & try to picture whats on your mind.

    Great piece.. could you check out 'No Way Out' its my newest poem.. thankss

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Aww that sent chills down my spine...it is so good to know at such a young age u have found love with someone so great...already makeing u feel like she is home. What a lucky girl. Most girls would kill to have someone like you! keep up that work. Good Luck--keep writing