Tell Me Not.

by Jordan W   Jan 29, 2008


I cannot stand to be without you
I cannot stand to not be holding you in my arms
I cannot stand this distance
I cannot stand this separation
I understand not the logic
I understand not the need
I love you so
I need you now
Tell me not of how we cannot be
Tell me not of how you love another
Tell me not of these trickeries
Please tell me..
That your only love...
Is me
And that you wish to be in my arms
Just as much as I wish for you to be
I wish to look deeply in your eyes and see the love I hold reflected
I wish to hear from your lips the three words I long for most
So tell me not that we cannot be
Tell me not of how you love another
Tell me not of these trickeries
For in the end
Giving voice to these things
Will only prolong my suffering
Giving voice to these things
Will only push me over the edge
And into the black abyss that awaits below

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  • 16 years ago

    by Troubled Dreams

    OMG i loved it. The peom was like a rap. the way it flowed. I love the wording and the emotion. Your a good writer. I wish I could make a guy I know think like you.

  • 16 years ago

    by SAINTS MATE

    This reminds me of myself.... loving some silly guy.... that accultay sed that he loved somebody eles.... this one hits close to home.... GUD JOB....KEEP WRITIN... mwa

    XxBaByxX

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Honestly,this poem was hard for me to follow.The form was weird and it made it hard for me to focus on.Maybe you should try putting it into stanzas instead of writting straight down.You had a lot of repeatance also that through me off.But there was some pretty good emotion in it and for that I give you a 4/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    Very nice! i liked it !

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