Comments : Tell Me Not.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    Very nice! i liked it !

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Honestly,this poem was hard for me to follow.The form was weird and it made it hard for me to focus on.Maybe you should try putting it into stanzas instead of writting straight down.You had a lot of repeatance also that through me off.But there was some pretty good emotion in it and for that I give you a 4/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by SAINTS MATE

    This reminds me of myself.... loving some silly guy.... that accultay sed that he loved somebody eles.... this one hits close to home.... GUD JOB....KEEP WRITIN... mwa

    XxBaByxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Troubled Dreams

    OMG i loved it. The peom was like a rap. the way it flowed. I love the wording and the emotion. Your a good writer. I wish I could make a guy I know think like you.