Take My Hand, Love My Soul

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 29, 2008


When I first met you I had these deep feelings,
I knew that you could be the one.
I've learned a lesson that love will find you,
If you just let it in.

God put us together forever my angel,
You're my best friend and its to the end.
I'll do anything for you,
Just to make your life happy.

Sometimes I pinch myself to see if I'm dreaming
Because this love we have is so real.
When I see you I dont really know
How you really feel.

Everytime that we make love,
It feels like the very first time.
I've learned a lessonThat love will find you
Because its so divine and so special

Baby you're my better half,
All I needed was you to come into my life.
I love you more than I've ever loved before you
I sacrificed so many things.

I'll go insane if you ever leave
Right now you're all that I know.
I feel what you feel, I'll protect you,
I will never leave you baby.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    This poem is deep and you can really feel the emotion. I love it! It conveys the message easily. <3<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This is a raw peice of emotions. The stanzas and structure are arranged nicely. Some of the ideas are repeating themselves. The choosing of words is simple and raw. Nice piece 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    5 verse 3ed line add " Than any other"
    5 verse "I would"

    The last verse I would rewrite all together.
    "Ill go insane from the pain"
    "If you ever leave me"
    scratch out the "right now"
    "I'll never let you go"

    Only sugestions may help with the flow.