by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Jan 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When I first met you I had these deep feelings, |
by RobinAnn13
This poem is deep and you can really feel the emotion. I love it! It conveys the message easily. <3<3 |
by Shinobi
This is a raw peice of emotions. The stanzas and structure are arranged nicely. Some of the ideas are repeating themselves. The choosing of words is simple and raw. Nice piece 4/5 |
by Lecrissa
5 verse 3ed line add " Than any other" |