5 verse 3ed line add " Than any other"
5 verse "I would"

The last verse I would rewrite all together.
"Ill go insane from the pain"
"If you ever leave me"
scratch out the "right now"
"I'll never let you go"

Only sugestions may help with the flow.

This is a raw peice of emotions. The stanzas and structure are arranged nicely. Some of the ideas are repeating themselves. The choosing of words is simple and raw. Nice piece 4/5

This poem is deep and you can really feel the emotion. I love it! It conveys the message easily. <3<3