Beautiful body

by Cathie   Jan 29, 2008


A beautiful body
is what you want it to be
but one thing you must not forget
is that it has to be in harmony

People overeat and ruin their bodies in glutney - People starves themselves in vain.
They forget about reality and cost a lot of pain... One should take care of ones personality and health, and not be considered with expectations and wealth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Farrah

    Hey thanks for the comment ur right ;)!! anyways i was lookin around and the topic just made me want to pen it so much so i opened and read and here i am loving it its just true to so many girls:D!! keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    "and not be considered with expectations and wealth."

    In this line the word 'considered' doesn't sound right to me. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say.

    I did love this poem though, to be honest. It's a great message- I totally agree with you. For the most part your word choice was pretty awesome too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    I like this poem's flow. I like the way the truth is expressed on how some people treat their bodies.

  • 16 years ago

    by Casey Lynn

    LOVED IT!!! Preach it girl!!!

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