LOVED IT!!! Preach it girl!!!

I like this poem's flow. I like the way the truth is expressed on how some people treat their bodies.

"and not be considered with expectations and wealth."

In this line the word 'considered' doesn't sound right to me. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say.

I did love this poem though, to be honest. It's a great message- I totally agree with you. For the most part your word choice was pretty awesome too.

Hey thanks for the comment ur right ;)!! anyways i was lookin around and the topic just made me want to pen it so much so i opened and read and here i am loving it its just true to so many girls:D!! keep up the good work!