I LIKE ur poems they seem to come from
inside ur heart. WITH TRUE FEELINGS
KEEP wrritting you r good at it. another
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Steph. this is a really good poem i liked it alot and that guy is right your poems do come from your heart 5/5 kasia

Although it rhymes.. the real important thing for a poem is the message and the emotions you want us to feel as we read your poems.. this is good though but it's too simple.. =]

Love it!!! ;)