Rain Dont Last Forever

by Hawaiizang3l   Jan 29, 2008


Rain Dont Last Forever

Baby i'm glad
That you let me go
Though I shed a million tears
I think i've truely grown

So goodbye to you
Goodbye to the nights i cried
No more will i feel sick
Of how i feel inside

You showed me the real you
The guy i was too blind to see
Now I'll just wait to find
A guy who will love me for me

So yes i'll give love another shot
Because i was taught to never say never
And now i finally realized
That the rain dont last forever

Copyright 2008 By Kekaulike Dabis

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Woah....who ever that guy is..he got served..good job..tc.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aw, this is a good poem. I wrote a poem kind of like this. This is a good poem, but maybe you should put the letters into lowercase. The uppercase letters make it look kind of bad. Good poem though.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    The words were beautiful. An all around wonderful poem. I loved your choice of words, amazingly flawless. It would be a lot better if it wasn't in all caps though. And with puncuation at the ends of every line. It'll get you a lot more comments and will look more professional. Keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I really love the title. In my opinion, this is really really simply great. Very short poem but I found it meaningful. 5/5 for sure

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