The Girl

by Trying to let go of reality   Jan 29, 2008


With a blank stare on my face
I spot the girl in this crowded place
Her beauty sends chills down my spine
I wish she was mine
If only she felt the same about me
But in my heart, I know it will never be.

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  • 13 years ago

    by dOUxMist

    I'm so sorry for being 3 years late. I haven't been able to get into my account, until today. :)
    I actually ran into a similar situation like this poem two weeks ago. It was nice yet sad. You did a nice job with this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    Absolutely amazing, and so true (unfortunaltely), I feel I have the same problems with guys.

    But great poem anways!!!

    XX3 Nia

  • 16 years ago

    by meganmarie

    This was short but so sweet and powerful. it was amazing. goodjob. you fit all the details and emotion into a short but beautifully writeen poem.

    --aprilsconspiracy

  • 16 years ago

    by DaydreamerSki

    I liked it. it was romance and tragedy all balled up in one. rock on due. lol =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The ending was good, because of the randomness in it, the way it didn't rhyme with the rest of the poem.

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