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Ok, so I didn't really like this poem as much as the first one of yours i read, and i can see some people didn't like it, but it's obvious that you try when you're writing your poems, you don't just throw it together and paste it on the site, right? lol.. and for that, I give it a 4!

Great poem, unfortunatley there are many ppl out there today who boost their own confidence by getting others down. Keep ya head up hayley xx

i don't know why but while reading your poem i just felt like shouting its words to people who do that kind of things (and there are plenty of them)

I'll bet you felt better after righting that poem, a lot of times poem are a great way to vent. great work. thanks for reading my poem , hourglass, ive submitted a new one since, tell me what you think. later