by Jenni Marie Jan 29, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
{And as mascara stains your cheeks...I smile.} |
by Robert
I enjoyed the vindictiveness in this poem very powerful and staight to the heart. The flow was good but the poem as it pertains to the title well there really wasn't that big of a bridge oh well just a thought Plot121 |
by VYXSIN
I loved this stanza: |
Like always a wonderful write from a excellent poet. The flow was just alright for me, I felt it could of been a bit better (but that's just my opinion) Your overall choice of vocabulary was well sought out and had a nice impact on the write. Keep up the great work. |
by Jaymes Haze
Really, where's the rhythm? |
This is another wow poem; You're a crazy good writter. I love this poem as well. Even though it's a bit crazy. |