The ending of this piece is firm and speaks for itself. The whole poem is an exposition for the strong ending you wrote. The choosing of words and flow led to this amazing meaning: you just can't take it! nice work 5/5

Nice job
the first stanza for me was a little weak with all the end rhyme. the last stanza was a little off on flow. the emotion was okay. but the message was really good go with the same mesage and make this stronger
4/5
kaila