What Went Wrong?

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Jan 29, 2008


What do you want from me Dad?
Because I give up trying
Nothing I do is ever enough
And only leaves me crying

Were no longer a family
We claim to always be
Because we no longer talk
Is it because you hate me?

You still let me do things
You still seem to trust me
But now it comes with consequences
Based on reasons I can't see

Next semesters going to be even harder
And I don't want it to tear us apart
I want to find a deeper story
And this is where I start...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is truely deep and exposes raw emotions. The rhyming, choosing od words and flow are all connected together in a great bond. Nice work 5/5